It's a very clunky fic, even leaving aside the Athena bits. Like, the scenes sound like they were written independently and sort of half-stitched together later; the continuity's terrible. And they just keep busting out weird lines, like the digeridoo ones.
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(Anonymous) 2015-12-31 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)I just wish I'd thought of doing it.
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