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heavensqueen ([personal profile] heavensqueen) wrote in [community profile] yuletide_coal2015-12-27 01:37 pm

Coalclaw Adventures

Keep the yulewank spirit alive

Re: Random Thoughts You Have While Reading Through The Collection

(Anonymous) 2015-12-31 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
It's a very clunky fic, even leaving aside the Athena bits. Like, the scenes sound like they were written independently and sort of half-stitched together later; the continuity's terrible. And they just keep busting out weird lines, like the digeridoo ones.

Re: Random Thoughts You Have While Reading Through The Collection

(Anonymous) 2015-12-31 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, my thought was that it was written collaboratively for the lulz.

Re: Random Thoughts You Have While Reading Through The Collection

(Anonymous) 2015-12-31 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
da

I just wish I'd thought of doing it.

Re: Random Thoughts You Have While Reading Through The Collection

(Anonymous) 2015-12-31 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought the didgeridoo line was intentional humor. Loved the whole gonzo thing.

Re: Random Thoughts You Have While Reading Through The Collection

(Anonymous) 2016-01-01 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Aha, it was written by fresne! That makes sense - she's always playing games with gender and sexuality in her omegaverse fics.